Not too good...
It moves to fast to see the unclear words. Only thing I really thought was funny was teh end, that girl sucking him off while he's in the grave xP
But other than that, I think you've got a lot to work on.
Such as a real premise and your animating skills.
It was very scratchy and looked very rookie.
The music was annoying too.
Try a little bit harder next time =]